I'm digging this piece.. Your getting your shading right for the most part.. But, your letter structure is a bit poor.. Practice simpler letters..then eventually start flexing your letters..
thanks gatz.. but yea you gotta learn your letter structure.. and Dayer.. dont be a send off..
yea ino i was lukin at it dis mornin n i was wonderin wer i was seein ma letters lol da Z at da end kinda throws it off but il get on it it was ma first tym doin dat style itl get beta