I'm digging this piece.. Your getting your shading right for the most part.. But, your letter structure is a bit poor.. Practice simpler letters..then eventually start flexing your letters..
thanx but yea ino i needa get dem structures down es kinda hard 2 c ma letters itl com along soon enuf wen i get bak in2 da books
pinche feks coming tru with the sketches.. mind im likin this one letter wise.. but please stop with them pointless extensions.. and those humongo trow ups..and work on the cleaness.. chea..